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Hey everyone! I'm new.
I wrote this when I was thinking about BD and how Edward must have inner turmoil to keep celibate before the "big night". There's a few lines not suitable for under 16 year olds, but I'm gonna post it anyway! I hope you love it, I loved writing it and getting into the character of Edward <3
The Struggle
To be a better man tonight
the struggle never ends
to be more human again tonight
more difficult each day
The decades of cold infinite loneliness
are almost behind me
I have not fought in vain
yet battle, not over
I know what Alice has seen
and I keep pretending
I meet her curious, questioning eyes
she sees us naked
She sees her naked under me
she sees her happy
she sees her moan under me
she sees my Bella
Why do I resist, she asks
she is not hurting
I shake my head and sigh
visions must end now
The decades that have made me
the man I am,
the decades that have hurt me
do not end tonight.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE feedback <3
Twilight woohoo <3
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